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u142

Now this is a way to do this source justice! A relentless barrage of things happening. Liked the ear rape.

 

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JokeyBRPG

Wow... I cannot bear to watch this.. It seems that you tried to experiment and literally throw whatever sticks to the wall. The only stuff I understood, but did not laugh due to feeling cliche, were the Mexican bull fight with Trump head and vulgar sex jokes. You remind me of myself back when I was a rush-job nobody back in late 2007 until 2009, when I just make random videos without anything interesting to throw back or try to be funny. It seems that you got plenty of ways to improve yourself by spending more time finding out what you do best and how you use the techniques to spell "you".  Hell, I even quit YTP from 2009 to 2015, when during the end of 2014, I have watched youtube poops of all kinds and reinvented myself to be a better that I was back in the early days of YTP.

 

In short and agreeing with @Biodegradable, please experiment more and give more thought on the various poopisms as well as making something new to the sources.

 

Every time I watch this, I always get this hilarious vibe that it falls right in line with @dew✿, who retired from YTP and moved on, despite that I actually made it based on tribute to her.

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GSgiraffes

I see you took advantage of the slapstick this had to offer. I'd normally expect a bunch of ear rape from this kind of ytp, but I guess it's still fine like this.

 

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EditsOfGreatBritain

What a great round. Love the rhythm of the stutter loops, remind me of Imaperson. Also I cracked up at "Ravioli Ravioli give me the DUH DUH DOOOO" and the brain rape bit at 0:40 was viewtiful.

 

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Just spectacular, EOGB. I can easily tell that you put a lot of effort into it, especially the part that starts at 0:39. I also like how you used ear rape wisely without it ever coming off as annoying. 

 

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Im another Channel

The effects are awesome and the jokes are funny too. The acid trip was cool too and the chroma keying was great too! 

 

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Sagan Blob

I can see you're inspired by some YTPers working today, such as Biodegradable. While the sentence mixings were hillarious and the acid trip was cool, the poop feels too short for me.

 

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TheWackyWeevil

You had a good use of effects, and the trippy scene was fantastic. Pretty good work there, Sagan. Keep it up!

 

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Without a doubt, this has got to be one of the best YTPs I've seen from you. The acid trip sequence felt far more astonishing compared with your previous ones, the masking was just right, the effects never fail to amaze me and the humour felt very clever. Out of all of the YTPs I've seen so far this year, I think this would certainly qualify for being one of the best.

 

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BoomDaCorgi1337

I almost got ninja'd :P 

OT: As usual, a very good, and in some places, trippy YTP from you, NK. 

 

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GSgiraffes

The combination of the source and the editing style reminds me quite a lot of older poops. You did pretty well, and proves you don't have to sentence mix in order to make a good infomercial poop.

 

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Sagan Blob

I swear GS, you never fail to amuse me. The fast-pace, the jokes, and oh my god! thetig3r42?! I really love that source, it's really exploitable. Also, i really love the 3D intro as well (wait, i thought you don't have 3D plugins?). Overall, it's 8.5/10.

 

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4 hours ago, Sagan Blob said:

(wait, i thought you don't have 3D plugins?).

I didn't know about 3d source alpha at the time, since I was relatively new to Vegas :P

OT: Continue with Sagan's post.

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Biodegradable

@Sagan Blob

Not as interesting as your previous work, but I honestly blame the source more than you. It felt more like you were rebelling against the source rather than working with it to find what's really exploitable about it. I suggest finding sources that really speak to you, but hey, if you think this source does speak to you then prove me wrong mate, I encourage it. hehehe

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Mackenzie

The intro is incredible. Whoever those guys are I love them now. Alright, it gets a tad too long now that we've watched it for a full minute with random gifs and other screens appearing around/on it.

Right after it starts with a source I don't like. No idea what is it but the artstyle is not attractive to me. Simple but effective editing, good.

I love the quick part about the piece of shit from the 80's.

I gotta say the MS-DOS parts are not exactly my thing. I love the concept but I don't see how would they ever fit into YTP style videos in my opinion.

The glitch part around 4:40 is probably my favourite part in this. Interesting sounds and visuals.

Overall the visuals get pretty interesting for the entire latter half of the video.

It's well made, just not exactly my style of a match, at least for the first half! Sorry!

 

Now let's step into an ancient territory.

 

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u142

Ancient territory, huh? It felt more source than edit, if you know what I mean, as well as slow-paced and reliant on cliches. I guess it just hasn't aged well. Although, I do think it's a good foundation for more work. Nice avatar picture, by the way.

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lionkingview

It was a bit too repiticious for my taste and it felt a bit awkward at times.

 

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DSYTP

This YTP is nice. The only problem is the "Michael Rosen" jokes, too predictable. Some stutter loops needed some work, otherwise you're fine. 7.5/10

 

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u142
9 hours ago, lionkingview said:

It was a bit too repiticious for my taste and it felt a bit awkward at times.

That's pretty vague criticism, how can I use this to get better when I only vaguely know what you're referring to?

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lionkingview
8 hours ago, u142 said:

That's pretty vague criticism, how can I use this to get better when I only vaguely know what you're referring to?

Alright: What i meant was : You mostly just used awkwardly timed stutter loops and it felt like an early 2000's poop(the Shorter the Clip you use to do the stuttering , the better). Also , and this might be a personal Preference Thing, but i always like a good poop to have a bit more sentence mixing . I thought the robotnic exploding Thing was kinda funny though

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