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Matt0417

It was okay. I did like how you used a "bad example" of a YTP as your source, but some of the effects are used again and again, not that much though.

 

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DSYTP

Your YTP is OK. Your jokes seems average at best, however I enjoyed the earrape part at 1:45, and the pacing is good. At least the effects seems varied enough to engage me.

 

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KingofSp4des01

Bezd entwy evr. 10/10.

In any cases, its pretty good.

 

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Biodegradable

I quite like it, but I'm not really great at analysing YTPMVs very much so I don't quite know what to say. I noticed not much difference between this and the original song except that you used someone else's voice? Not entirely sure how that works and how much the visuals from the other videos you've used actually utilise any sound from them to create the music like other YTPMVs. It's definitely unique and I think it's cool. I guess the only thing I think could use some work is it's a little boring visually and I think you could make more things happen on the screen. Other than that, it's certainly intriguing.

 

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DogsRNice

Your editing is very very good but most of the video is just loops

 

 

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NITROCONCRETE1

I was ok, but I feel like it needed more editing to spice it up a little. It was kind of bland in some parts. The editing was kind of choppy too. I did however like a few of the jokes and effects (0:45 was cool). 

 

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KingofSp4des01

I really enjoyed it, though it did kinda sound quiet in the beginning.

 

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Biodegradable

You and Mori did a really nice job. It's visually interesting and it's rather catchy, which is what you really want in a YTPMV. Really neat stuff.

 

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Matt0417

The sentence mixing was great, the effects were great, and the stuttering was spot-on. Great job.

 

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BandanaBoi

Sorry, I didn't like it. The jokes were strangely paced and most of the jokes I didn't find funny since they either made no sense or they weren't funny. Also you added too much distortion in the ytp even in moments that don't need it. Also can you stop adding YTPMV moments in your ytps since the pitch doesn't even match up and it.

[NOTE -THIS IS MY FIRST YTP THAT I UPLOADED TO YOUTUBE AND IT'S AWFUL.

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PancakeLord117

Actually, this wasn't bad at all. Just okay. While there isn't much variety for my tastes, it's a pretty good attempt for your first YTP. However, I strongly agree that your newer YTPs are miles better. If you want real awful, then look at my oldest YTPs.

 

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DSYTP

The title are stupid, the quality are shitty as fuck, the acid trips is awful, the jokes and pacing are badly done, and the song choice are shitty. (AKA The Best Worst YTP)

I LOVE THIS INTENTIONALLY BAD YTP!

NOTE: Same as PancakeLord117.

 

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Biodegradable

Well, that was dreadful (which was the point) so that's a good thing right?!?!?!?! lol I don't know what else I'm supposed to say about something that's supposed to intentionally be awful other than, "Good job, it sucks!"

 

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6 hours ago, Biodegradable said:

Well, that was dreadful (which was the point) so that's a good thing right?!?!?!?! lol I don't know what else I'm supposed to say about something that's supposed to intentionally be awful other than, "Good job, it sucks!"

 

Good job there needs to be more der furthurs face ytps

 

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Biodegradable

I like it, but it's way too damn short to really say anything substantial. You really ought to take your time with your videos so you can exploit your sources for all their worth. Also, goddamn it, Succ, please start embedding your videos already.

 

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SuccyLord
5 hours ago, Biodegradable said:

I like it, but it's way too damn short to really say anything substantial. You really ought to take your time with your videos so you can exploit your sources for all their worth. Also, goddamn it, Succ, please start embedding your videos already.

 

It was for a Collab called the fast as PHUCK Collab,that made the entrants make an entry in a day,so yeah.

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DSYTP

For Bio:

The jokes were well done, I loved the variation on the effects, the fast pacing YTP works for you, and the sentence mixing is bizarre and funny at the same time. Sometimes, the narrator uttered the word "fuck" at 0:18 (real: "fart") which made it funnier to me. Overall, this YTP is great.

I agree with Bio, succylord, you should try to start embed your YTP, since you don't have to click on the link (AKA no new tab required)

 

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PancakeLord117

Deary me, this was a pain to watch. The jokes were terrible and I couldn't understand what was going on. The shaky camera didn't make it better, either. But since this is for the Worst Collab Ever, that's a good thing. Nice job on making it as bad as you can!

 

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TheRealXboxNerd

We're all about honesty here. While I'm happy you've reached 100 subscribers (a significant milestone for sure), that doesn't excuse the overuse of ear rape and stupidly high saturation of visual effects. It may just be my own opinion on comedy, but I've never really been a fan of the sort of in-your-face style present in this video.

Don't take it too personally, there's always room for improvement with everyone! Well done again for reaching 100 subs.

 

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