I think this article meets up to the standards of the other pages. It's actually pretty well written, it just has veeeeeeery overused jokes. Do you want me to make it more serious, though? I'll do that, and modernize it, if you would like that. I understand how pissed people get wihen I use the word "dinner" in my pages. - TSamson 13:42 7 July 2012 (PDT)
- While we welcome humor in articles, they should not completely be the basis of an one. Jokes must be balanced with information or the article loses its value. To be honest I have no idea who this guy is even after I read the article. What does he do? (other than being a Professional asshole) What media is he from?
- Also please read Help:Characters. It will give an idea about how to create better articles - TheFXexpert 10:55, 7 July 2012 (PDT)
- Understood. By the way, Mr. Toot is not from an actual media source, and is just some random guy I filmed.